Gift for jedimasterstar

Dec 12, 2011 01:24

To: jedimasterstar
From: eriphi

Title: The Last (and First) Christmas Gift
Characters and/or Pairings: 11th Doctor, Amy, Rory, River Song and Melody Pond.
Rating: Gen
Summary: Melody Pond's first Christmas.
Author's Notes: For the prompts heartache, loneliness and family, with a bit of the festive spirit thrown in. These really are the toys in the orphanage room. ( Read more... )

fanfiction, river, amy, eleven, rory

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joking December 11 2011, 17:03:13 UTC
Oh, Rory, wanting to give Melody a Christmas present. That is so sweet.

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jessicaqueen December 11 2011, 21:31:40 UTC
Oh Rory. ♥

This heartwarming moment for the Pond family plus the Doctor, bordered as it is by that slowly thawing coldness of the younger Melody Pond, is strangely perfect.

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apple_pathways December 12 2011, 00:25:32 UTC
This was very poignant, and touching--so very sweet! Let me echo those before me: Oh Rory! ♥

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jedimasterstar December 12 2011, 21:00:04 UTC
This is wonderful! What a great gift!

I loved how you used the prompts I gave. I didn't think anyone would be able to do it!

Poor Rory. Just wanting to give his daughter a Christmas gift. And I liked how you contrasted the Ponds, the Doctor, and River celebrating Christmas then showed what Melody's Christmas would have been like growing up.

Saving to memories!

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miranda_wave December 12 2011, 23:12:37 UTC
This was fantastic. Truly. I love Rory.

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