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Gift for wnnb_darklord

Dec 13, 2011 00:40

To: wnnb_darklord
From: fortisgreen

Title: Changes
Characters and/or Pairings: Tenth Doctor, Donna Noble and Jack Harkness
Rating: M
Warnings: Mild swearing, suggestive language/concepts
Summary: Sometimes the cure is worse than the cause.
Word Count: 1,502

( Changes )

fanfiction, ten, jack, donna

Comments 3

wnnb_darklord December 12 2011, 15:04:42 UTC

Ha :D You filled both the werewolf *and* the 'I'm a girl' prompt! That one was rather unexpected, but also hilarious. And Jack was just pure Jack about the whole thing :)

The Doctor chasing cats up trees, eating raw steak, Donna threatening to hit him with a rolled up newspaper made me laugh. I also loved the little touch about Donna squeezing Jack's bum!

jessicaqueen December 12 2011, 15:12:56 UTC

Definitely one of the wackiest werewolf fics ever, but that's just what the Doctor going through this should be like. Very funny.

maniacalshen December 14 2011, 02:25:55 UTC

This is really cute! I love Donna being worried, and Jack, LOL, I bet his brain(?) was on overdrive. The omniscient narrator probably shouldn't call the Doctor "she," though, as he's still a he, just in a woman's body. Still, other than that little gender snafu, I really liked this. :)