this summer...was...different. not bad, not good, not anything really. i don't know what to think. maybe i'll fill you in more when i'm more sure of myself
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Ah, love love love the story. The paralell between abuse girl and discarded doll- wow. You're seriously such an amazing writer; it's not fair. My only suggestion would be that the part about breaking her glass heart seemed a bit cliche. Perhaps porcelain or china heart would be more fitting?
In any case, maybe pepper spray is easier to find than mace... I LOVE YOU! See you soon (06!!!)
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In any case, maybe pepper spray is easier to find than mace... I LOVE YOU! See you soon (06!!!)
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