Fic

[dymphna_gold]

Title: Er, none yet. I am not good with titles. I think this may be a genetic trait. My siblings and I all have completely unimaginative names. Even our family pets had monikers of overwhelming dullness. So I believe that this is just one more item to add to the ever-expanding “blame the parents” list.
Rating: G
Pairing: Remus/Sirius, Remus/

Comments

[lazy_neutrino]

Ouch! So lovely, and I admire people who can write these missing moments. This flows naturally and it's really easy to read - signs, to me, of a good deal of hard work in the background.

I particularly liked the 'infatuated infant' phrase, and I liked your Remus and Peter characterisations very much indeed.

And ohhhh the soggy book. Beautifully understated.

One thing: Privately, Remus though Peter hadn’t a chance with the highly attractive and popular Lydia, but Peter was nothing if not persistent.

'though' should be 'thought'?

Thank you for reminding me so effortlessly why I like your writing so much.

[dymphna_gold]

Thank you so much. For the correction, too. I really should get a beta. I don't know why I don't *shakes head*

I really didn't expect anyone to read this, so your comment is doubly welcome. I really appreciate your feedback. :)