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[dynamitedane]

Four months strike Twelve.

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[stfnegln]

His cousin and his six bestest friends are the closest things he ever got as brothers and sisters in his 'only child' lifetime. Ever since highschool, they've stuck together and looked out for one another. Other than his seven friends, there was his blood family.

-you like said six best friends then you said seven!

that's the only thing that caught my eye.
DANNNEE!! I LOOOVEE ITT!! i don't wanna write mine. it won't compare!! ahha, i have like writer's block now! that was amazing. i seriously feel so touched. LMFAO! okaay okaayy.. i'm gonna shh!

sooo yeaahh! gotta like go now! byee! ( happy 2+2! (: ) love you!

[stfnegln]

The word 'quiet' no longer exists when his family is around.

existed not exists!

[dynamitedane]

Lmao I'm doo-doo-deuce. What'd I say? A ba jillion mistakes. Hurry up and write Chapter 2!

Eating at the garden was fun! Happy 4 months :) Love you.

[argaela]

no actually, exists is still gramatically correct, lmao (nerd face)
happy 4 months.
-can't let go of that KNOWLEDGE!

[stfnegln]

it is gramatically correct but he was switching from present tense to past tense and past tense would have suited that sentence better!

lmfao, ALVINN!!! DON'T RUIN MY DREAMS OF BEING A WRITER OF SOME SORT! :(

[akatopnotch]

LMAO you guys are jokers.
nice story though (Y)
and happy 4 months :)

[dynamitedane]

Whyy thank ya!

[anonymous]

the not-at-all-overrated saccharinity - but not really - of you both give me hope.
haha, in a good way of course.

nice story,
i see you're using your "story-telling" skills in better ways
than writing about people - by people i mean yours truly -
and how hey they got dumped by some bunny and went all emo.

remember that?

and to that, here'smy long overdue happy-4-months-greeting!

ps. i just might have a draft for the original song.

[harlequeenn]

crap, this is sarah btw. 8-|

[dynamitedane]

lmao! I remember that story. That story's almost a year old now. Fast huh?

Let's see those lyrics