Comments | dyrne_keeper: Fic: Letter to a G.I. (2/6)

dyrne_keeper

Fic: Letter to a G.I. (2/6)

Feb 21, 2013 12:01

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phantomofarose February 22 2013, 05:36:49 UTC

Oh my god, this is just beautiful so far. The movie story, the set up, the way you've writte. It - I'm in love. And marley is such an awesome touch - I love her! But goodness I want to shake these boys and make them see each other!!!

dyrne_keeper February 25 2013, 15:46:13 UTC

Thank you! I'm so glad you're enjoying it (and that you like Marley - she was a joy to play with!) Thank you for reading! <3

mardie186 February 22 2013, 13:12:26 UTC

This is so richly detailed. I feel bad for Kurt, being in Blaine's shadow. And now Blaine's seeing Jamie. Hoping that when they are in Algeria, Blaine will realize and act on his attraction to Kurt. Kurt just seems so lonely. And Blaine appears to have "friendzoned" him. Hope that changes.

dyrne_keeper February 25 2013, 15:46:58 UTC

Thank you! Both of the boys have a bit of a journey to go on - but don't they always get together in the end? ;)

The line.... lovesrabbits February 22 2013, 15:08:04 UTC

You allow your readers to think. I like that about your writing. You give your reading audience some credit for having thoughts of their own and where they want these characters to go. The line between Brian/Dave and Kurt/Blaine is a very thin one, becoming thinner as the story progresses. And it's certainly keeping me on the edge of my seat! So much bubbling under the surface as they feel their way around each other. Bravo! And tomorrow can't come soon enough.

Re: The line.... dyrne_keeper February 25 2013, 15:50:08 UTC

Oh my goodness. As a writer, this is such an incredible comment to get - knowing where to draw that line, where you can trust your audience (and "trust the audience!" is something my betas do pound into me; they'll be glad ro know it paid off!) and when something is as confusing as hell and needs clarification is...well, it's hard. I am thrilled that it is working! I had SO much fun playing with where the line between Kurt/Dave and Blaine/Brian lay as well. I play a lot of D&D, and the bleed between character and player is always one that's fascinated me. I'm so glad you're enjoying it, and thank you so much for reading and for commenting!! <3

Re: The line.... lovesrabbits February 25 2013, 17:51:52 UTC

This is one of the best pieces of fanfic writing I've read in a very long time and it deserves a review. It is my pleasure. There aren't enough writers out there who trust their audience, so when one comes along, it's very refreshing. There is also a very fine line between character and reader, and that's what draws me in to your work. Again, can't wait until the next installment tomorrow.