Hold No Bounds

May 10, 2011 17:59

Hold No Bounds
homin; pg
romance/drama
6,983 words
help_japan fic for gyummy

They're stuck in the middle of hiatus when they start daydreaming about what they'd do, if they could never perform again, if they had to leave the industry. It’s just a game, and time keeps passing, and nothing comes of it… but. Who’s to say what’s real?
The chime at the front door sounds, and Changmin peeks up over the edge of his magazine. )

help_japan, fic, p:homin, dbsk

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oldwillow_brook May 11 2011, 07:13:24 UTC
This is one of those times where a story not only takes you for a ride you've never been on before but it takes you into this mesh of reality and dreams and realizing that sometimes reality is like everything you never dreamed of but still feels so unreal ( ... )

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dystopialights May 25 2011, 02:56:22 UTC
/super-fail for taking so long to respond, omg D;First off, as always, thank you so much for your wonderful comment bb ♥ They always give me the warm and fuzzies ( ... )

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latenightchai May 25 2011, 03:46:51 UTC
/too lazy to relogin

IT'S SO SOON. I'M GOING TO SEE THEM WITH MY REAL EYES ;A; /saying this forever on repeat

I have to work that day until 6 but my office is downtown, like a twenty minute walk away and I don't want to have to repay for parking, so I might just be there really early lol. Even if it means leaving my car in a sketchy parking lot... idk for sure yet D:

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gyummy May 11 2011, 12:07:48 UTC
i'm not good with words and really this is just, really, amazing. i even stopped at afew paragraphs just to breathe and continue, alternating between the reality and dreams.

i've always liked reading fics involving the lawsuit, i like to know what other people would convey the situation, and i absoulutely love your version. the way that you integrate it in. just, beautiful, amazing.

and the comment above mine ^^^ makes me go, "mte!!" ;~;

i'm so glad that you liked my 'list of likes' and that you enjoyed writing it. it's one of the best i've ever read. and also i would like to point your focus onto the gorgeous man in my icon which correctly displays the exact face i had when i knew that you would be writing for people who didn't win the auction, when i was writing down the list of things that i'd like [because of the shop!au like, this fic came ;~;], when you updated me you finished it, when i'm reading it and when i'm typing this. thank you, this is really beautiful and you are really amazing. ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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dystopialights May 25 2011, 03:09:32 UTC
Yay! I'm so happy you liked it!! Especially seeing as I liked writing it so much ;)

I'm also glad you liked the lawsuit parts (and as I also commented about in the reply to the comment above yours, haha), writing that part was a bit of a balancing act. I wanted to keep the focus on Homin and what they were going through, which was affected by the lawsuit but wasn't the real issue. Acceptance of their situation was a key theme - in part the lawsuit, but also the surreal dreamscape they seem to be steadily immersing themselves in.

And I can only thank you again for your generosity in donating. I'm honored that you chose to bid for me, that you provided me with the inspiration, and for all those things, this fic was the least I could do! It was an absolute pleasure working with you ♥

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satoshiice May 25 2011, 04:26:28 UTC
Seriously this was beautiful....your writing is simply amazing....it's one of those things where the feelings build up and become so intense that you want to break down and cry.....that's what this story did to me.....it was just so bitter sweet.....there are parts of the story where my heart just aches for both changmin and yunho especially when they are in paris.....and the whole imaginative sequence with the shop was just brilliant and beautiful....this was an absolutely amazing read....I loved every second of it even though it left me feeling sad and bittersweet.....lol...I hope my comment makes some sort of sense! =)

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dystopialights May 25 2011, 17:35:33 UTC
Your comment made perfect sense - and I appreciate it do much! I'm glad you liked it, especially the shop scenes, as most of those were my favorite, too ;) Bittersweet it most definitely is ♥ Thank you so much!

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hi_yu May 25 2011, 04:53:53 UTC
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I think the icon im using explained all.

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I cant diver the reality and the unreality/dream/au....
but at the end, i understand that they continued their life as best as they can. Not as how they'd like it to be but moved forward with what they have and could be done. so they moved on.
Poignant, balanced, emotionally filled, a bit of sadness but it's rationally logical. all in all, i say this story is perfect.
Nothing left to imagination and everything just as it was.
hwaiting

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dystopialights May 25 2011, 17:57:08 UTC
Thank you so much! 'Perfect' is too high a compliment haha, you're too sweet! I'm really glad you enjoyed it and could appreciate it so :D

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eris_kira May 25 2011, 09:29:38 UTC
you are an amazing writer.

The mesh of reality and dream was written so well and organized.
The fact that you interpret the lawsuit thing make me teared up a bit ;__;
The Paris scene, the old lady in the bakery complete the fic sfm.

please continue writing HoMin ♥ because you are so good in writing them.

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dystopialights May 25 2011, 18:03:02 UTC
Thank you so much, bb! That really means a lot ♥ I'm glad you liked and that it could affect you so :')

And I do plan on it! Another of my help_japan fics is Homin, and even then those two are never very far from mind. The KYHD special edition photoshoot?? Guh :Q___

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