wow! the ending was so scary. i was already quite scared a few times along the story. i am so happy junsu was there for yoochun. i love the way junsu left his family, how he paused a bit, but still left. argh, i can't say it how i mean it, lol, but i hope you get it. this is just so lovely that i'm going to read the other entries in the contest. ^_^
my heart is beating so loud right now. that, that freaking last scene. oh my goodness. i can't even explain how scared i was reading that.
oh gosh, i love how even though these were glimpses of their years growing up, it still portrays the innocence and the how junsu is so simplistic and yoochun just dreams big. i love their personalities and how they interact, especially when junsu pushed yoochun off the bench xD very cute. and the plastic cups was a total childhood memory. i loved those.
i must say, this is a very realistic au for the boys and i love it ♥ totally memming.
woah.. this just.. woah.. i really like how you wrote junsu´s thoughts and displayed their emotions and feelings. so realistic. i could totally feel the tight friendship between them. you´re really an awesome writer. :D i loved it. <3
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Seriously, I loved this story. *sniff*
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I really do love this story. I read it again today, in fact. :D
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please do! they're all really good ♥
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oh gosh, i love how even though these were glimpses of their years growing up, it still portrays the innocence and the how junsu is so simplistic and yoochun just dreams big. i love their personalities and how they interact, especially when junsu pushed yoochun off the bench xD very cute. and the plastic cups was a total childhood memory. i loved those.
i must say, this is a very realistic au for the boys and i love it ♥ totally memming.
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THIS IS BEAUTIFUL. IT'S JUST...
okay.i'm incoherent. ^^;;;;
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I LOVE THIS, and YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XD
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i really like how you wrote junsu´s thoughts and displayed their emotions and feelings. so realistic.
i could totally feel the tight friendship between them. you´re really an awesome writer. :D
i loved it. <3
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