love on a string

Jan 18, 2010 18:13

love on a string
yoosu; pg-13
romance
6,608 words

My second entry for the dbsk_secretgame Challenge, which snagged second place for Best Junsu ♥
Two boys, two windows, two paper cups. Junsu grows up and dreads the day he’ll be left behind. )

winner!, p:yoosu, fic, dbsk

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femmephantom January 19 2010, 23:19:30 UTC
This...love...wow. Really. I might come back and leave a more coherent (and complimentary) comment later, but I need to go and find a box of tissues.

Seriously, I loved this story. *sniff*

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latenightchai January 20 2010, 00:15:34 UTC
thank you! but, oh man, your icon... now that is sad D: lol

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femmephantom January 21 2010, 03:10:40 UTC
Would you have preferred this one? (i haz a ton of sad icons, for some reason *shrug*)

;)

I really do love this story. I read it again today, in fact. :D

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dystopialights January 21 2010, 17:40:22 UTC
oh kangin... sad, but nothing pulls my heartstrings like min :')

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ceris_mea January 20 2010, 00:31:27 UTC
wow! the ending was so scary. i was already quite scared a few times along the story. i am so happy junsu was there for yoochun. i love the way junsu left his family, how he paused a bit, but still left. argh, i can't say it how i mean it, lol, but i hope you get it. this is just so lovely that i'm going to read the other entries in the contest. ^_^

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latenightchai January 20 2010, 01:01:52 UTC
thanks! junsu was definitely yoochun's rock throughout this, even if he was a little slow in realizing it ;) lol
please do! they're all really good ♥

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padmik January 20 2010, 02:01:29 UTC
my heart is beating so loud right now. that, that freaking last scene. oh my goodness. i can't even explain how scared i was reading that.

oh gosh, i love how even though these were glimpses of their years growing up, it still portrays the innocence and the how junsu is so simplistic and yoochun just dreams big. i love their personalities and how they interact, especially when junsu pushed yoochun off the bench xD very cute. and the plastic cups was a total childhood memory. i loved those.

i must say, this is a very realistic au for the boys and i love it ♥ totally memming.

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dystopialights January 20 2010, 02:10:29 UTC
thank you! i'm very glad you you enjoyed it ;)♥

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akihikaru January 20 2010, 09:45:58 UTC
WOW. YOU ARE SO... I DON'T KNOW WHAT TO TELL YOU.

THIS IS BEAUTIFUL. IT'S JUST...

okay.i'm incoherent. ^^;;;;



I LOVE THIS, and YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XD

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dystopialights January 20 2010, 09:49:09 UTC
thank you ♥ :D

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finemotion January 20 2010, 16:44:11 UTC
woah.. this just.. woah..
i really like how you wrote junsu´s thoughts and displayed their emotions and feelings. so realistic.
i could totally feel the tight friendship between them. you´re really an awesome writer. :D
i loved it. <3

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latenightchai January 20 2010, 17:08:06 UTC
thanks so much ;D

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