Comments | dystopialights: run-on over me

dystopialights

run-on over me

Jan 20, 2010 01:19

run-on over me
minsu; r
romance/angst
1,038 words

'I fear those big words, Stephen said, which make us so unhappy.' - James Joyce, Ulysses
( at least there are some things - these things - he still comes to you for. )

fic, p:minsu, dbsk

Comments 21

weerainbow January 22 2010, 14:35:48 UTC

wow, the depth of this made me feel like I was digging a great pit to get to understand them as I read...and still kept finding more clay to dig up. they're a complicated pair but I still love them!
your words were really beautiful and filled with real feelings...strong feelings. There is so much unsaid beteween these two, so much that seems to be hidden behind the walls they built up *sighs*
♥

dystopialights January 25 2010, 08:15:45 UTC

thank you so much! there is definitely a lot of unexpressed emotion between the two of them - even irl, i think. it's probably why they're so very fascinating. and lovable ;D

shuuseieki January 23 2010, 15:01:31 UTC

I don't see very much MinSu anywhere on LJ, and this could probably be the best I've read so far. The sentences are short and simple, yet they convey so much emotion and every word carries a message that comes together to be a beautifully written story. The whole time I was reading that, your writing style makes me feel every bit of their emotion, as if I was the one experiencing it for myself. I'm really envious as to how much feeling you can put into a story, and I really, REALLY loved that fic. ♥

dystopialights January 25 2010, 08:31:26 UTC

thank you! ♥ i'm glad you enjoyed the style, as well. it was something i was mostly just experimenting with, but i was pretty pleased with the results =)

tulita July 8 2011, 05:54:12 UTC

i just read that first part and you know, usually i'd wait to finish the rest of a story to comment, but that first part alone is absolutely stunning and i am speechless in just how beautiful and real and painful and heart-warming at the same time (?) it is.

tulita July 8 2011, 06:01:10 UTC

MY HEART O M G and i don't even ship minsu (...that much anyway compared to other otps ahahha). literally i have a hand over my chest, surprised in the punch of emotion from so little words. this is stunning.

dystopialights July 12 2011, 02:37:06 UTC

Thank you so much ♥! I'm so glad you liked it, this is one of those off-shot experiments that turned out quite well, I think ;)

cosmicanomaly January 26 2012, 04:47:57 UTC

Hi there!

I think this was my first Minsu.. Lool. So beautiful and tragic, and honestly, I do think that Junsu's not as.. innocent(?)/naive(?)/etc. as he seems, so this is like looking inside his head and seeing a whole new world.

ii and vi and vii were the ones that made me weakest. :3

Have I mentioned that I love your writing? Gah.

dystopialights January 26 2012, 20:50:46 UTC

Oooh, welcome to the wonderfully playful, twisted world of Minsu, rofl! These boys are a special sort, I miss them and their demanding ways :') ♥

I'm glad you liked it, and this interpretation of Junsu - thank you so much bb! ♥

elvenknight16 March 27 2012, 23:39:07 UTC

This is beautifully sad & bittersweet~
But i love it nonetheless. i. ii. iii. were heart-breaking. but when i reached vii. you killed me then.
honestly you portray such a minsu that i cannot help but drown myself in the complicated love between these two.
Thank you for sharing Sweetie ^^
I truly loved this <3