and we'll be thieves

[dystopialights]

and we'll be thieves
yunjae, g
romance
727 words

if he could, he would wrap you in his words and spin you a world so real you’d never want to leave.

Comments

[gettogospel]

oh its been long since i've read yunjae~ and its good i came back or else i would have missed this beauty~~~~ it was so goood~~||
the words were so believable and felt real~^^~
thank you so much

[dystopialights]

and thank you for reading! and commenting ;)♥

[psronnie]

It's good. I admire people who can do this. String words together to form something wonderful where readers can use their imagination to soar off towards the unlimited boundaries of their minds.
Glad you didnt add in the back story. I think it would've been a spoiler.

[dystopialights]

thank you so much! i'm truly glad you enjoyed it ♥

[_happy_as_rain_]

Wow, I really liked this. I think the part that makes it really meaningful was when you tied it all together to (perhaps?) their present situation--or any situation, really, where they are apart and alone. Aughhh I'm not explaining it well... I mean, I guess reading all these fantastical and strange images--and suddenly seeing phone, suddenly seeing the comedown. It makes the reality hit you know? Even if there's hope. Yeah. Um. ♥!!! :D

[dystopialights]

thank you! you definitely hit the nail on the head as to what i was trying to go for with this! completely fantastical, and yet in the end part of their reality... oh, the powers of the imagination~ :D♥

[earth_sunshine]

Lol.I'm so glad i read this. >.<
So good.

[gunfightings]

Lovely piece ♥