push, drown (01/03)

May 17, 2010 14:20

push, drown
jaemin, minsu (eventual jaeminsu); pg-13
romance/drama
2,812 words
because of/blamed on/for itsplashes

Junsu is the friend, the sidekick, the last resort. He is the outsider, always looking in... but he can't know where to stand if they keep changing the boundaries.
part one. junsu watches them together- )

p:jaeminsu, p:jaemin, fic, s:push-drown, p:minsu, dbsk

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dystopialights May 18 2010, 19:34:48 UTC
junsu's definitely going through some tough times :( i would say the phrase "sloppy seconds" is a bit harsh, though - jaejoong is just a much a part of this relationship as changmin and junsu. what role he plays, however, we have yet to see ;D

thank you so much for reading! ♥

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dystopialights May 18 2010, 19:49:54 UTC
oh, don't be sorry! i was just pointing out that there's going to be a lot more going on between them all than your normal, straightforward pairings. all sides have got a little something going on, so no one will end up sloppy seconds, safe to say :)

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mearii87 May 17 2010, 22:51:45 UTC
Psh. I hardly did anything.

I AM STILL MAKING FROWNY FACES. And as I reread this I was ironically listening to Junsu's song again. But the toothpaste scene is still the most adorable thing ever, so it's okay :)

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dystopialights May 18 2010, 19:38:47 UTC
Psh. You helped lots. It... still probably wouldn't be posted if it weren't for you, so there :D

JUNSU IS A SAD BOY. FEEL HIS PAIN >:( lol, i still love that scene too. i tihnk it might be my favorite :)

♥♥♥

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itsplashes May 17 2010, 23:04:47 UTC
Can I just say hoooomg. <3 I don't have time to read right now as I'm going to work but I'll be back tonight. ;)

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itsplashes May 17 2010, 23:37:32 UTC
Ugh. What. Junsu is so sad. D: But Jaejoong is so sad, too. ): I can't wait to see how this develops. I know Changmin is the main man here but do you see how interesting the development of Jaesu is? /dies. I know you do. XD

Maybe a longer comment later. Really going now. :)

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dystopialights May 18 2010, 19:45:07 UTC
rofl ♥

everyone is sad! D: interesting developments are interesting, that's all i'll say~ (except changmin so the main man. some hot property right there >:D) and, gdi, yes i do. the jaesu bits were even fun to write and I BLAME YOU FOR THIS. ALL OF THIS IS ON YOU >:( /sobs

:D♥

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0kiwi0 May 17 2010, 23:05:55 UTC
the minsu threw me back a little but it is written beautifuly : ) can't wait for the next part ^^, see how everythign develops from now on

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dystopialights May 18 2010, 19:45:51 UTC
thank you! i'll do my best to post it soon :)

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natipooh May 18 2010, 00:24:07 UTC
OMG, FINALLY SOMEONE WROTE JAEMINSU! ♥ ♥ ♥
I cannot thank you enough for writing this.
I just love these 3 together! :D

*is uber happy*

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dystopialights May 18 2010, 19:47:09 UTC
haha, i'm glad you liked! jaemin and minsu are two of my favorite pairings... jaesu not so much ): so this has definitely been an experiment, but one i've really come to like ;D♥

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