Johnny's Orphanage series

Jul 17, 2010 00:37



Johnny's orphanage

The Beginning…

Author: me.

Genre: fluff, a bit of angst and romance.

Character: KAT-TUN,NEWESandARASHI.

Pairing: RyoDa, main, others.

Beta : rin_chan267

Rating: PG.

Disclaimer: I own no one.

Summary: what happing when a new kid comes.

A/N: this is my FIRST fic ever all the Johnnies in this fic are chibis BUT they are the same as to what ( Read more... )

johnny's orphanage

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sharmidev July 17 2010, 06:12:37 UTC
that can't be the end!!!!! you should really think about continuing this the story line is awesome!! i am completely addicted and i really want to know what Arashi is planning! oh and there are a little of errors in the English and if you want i could point them out.

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you like it XD *so happy* e_eliza_d26 July 17 2010, 17:17:20 UTC
I planed it to be a series

as long asyou like I guess there well be more

and I well like it if you can show me the errors

my spelling is terrible

thank you

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Re: you like it XD *so happy* sharmidev July 17 2010, 20:37:18 UTC
I don’t know if these are on purpose because they are kids and probably talk funny and maybe thats what you are trying to do but I shall just point it out anyways k ( ... )

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simten July 17 2010, 20:17:02 UTC
it wasss sooo cuteeeeeeeeeeeee*hugsfrombehindlikeryo**kidding-grins*

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sari_pikapika July 17 2010, 23:08:16 UTC
aww~~cute but a few mis-spellings here and there and grammar but it was a cute story :D

thanks for sharing XD

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e_eliza_d26 July 17 2010, 23:41:38 UTC
Thank you all for reading and leaving a comment

I well try to fix it and the next one well hopefully be better

*kiss for everyone*

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fancyann1974 July 18 2010, 17:27:38 UTC
wow so cute and sweet
hope you do more
thank you for sharing

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