For annie00732: An Ending that Fits

[peppervl]

Disclaimer: The following is a work of fiction. The author has no knowledge of and is making no claims about the real-life activities of anyone depicted herein. This is for entertainment purposes only and no profit has been made.
Rating: The overall rating for this challenge is NC-17. Not all fics are, but some will be.
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Comments

[phnx_rising]

absolutely wonderful! such a sweet ending!

I like that we begin by seeing things from Orlando's POV--complete with the bittersweetness of wanting more than one thinks one can have. And I llike the insight we get later into Viggo as he struggles to find words.

lovely job!

[admirabile]

Orlando's yearning throughout was wonderfully palpable. So happy he's not yearning anymore. :-)

[rocketbalm]

Great job! Lovely, silly boys.

[annie00732]

Absolutely wonderful :)

the abyss of despair seemed to get deeper and darker and he was still falling freely. beautiful description

i love the depth of Orlando's pain and how you wrote from his POV. More than I could have dreamed up with this prompt :)

[arcadii]

Loved It! It's good that they had friends that cared enough to lie to them, or they may never have gotten together.