For alliwantisanelf: Wanna Bet?

Jun 02, 2007 02:19

Disclaimer: The following is a work of fiction. The author has no knowledge of and is making no claims about the real-life activities of anyone depicted herein. This is for entertainment purposes only and no profit has been made.
Rating: The overall rating for this challenge is NC-17. Not all fics are, but some will be.
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admirabile June 3 2007, 02:36:23 UTC
Oh, my god. This was Whoooo-eee! So hot! And delightful! And HOT!

I soooooo want to see Orlando all dressed up and prettified for his man! *ROWR*

And the sex.... It was like a smorgasbord of kink! Crossdressing, restraints, cockrings, gags...Delicious!

If you can't tell, I really enjoyed this. I have no idea who the excellent author is. tiary perhaps? That's just a shot in the dark.

Anyway, al is going to LOVE this. She's not able to get on lj this weekend (she wanted me to let you know that) - but she's very much looking forward to reading it! Especially since I let her know how *good* it is.

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alliwantisanelf June 4 2007, 06:19:57 UTC
Crossdressing, restraints, cockrings, gags...

Don't forget the mirror!!!!

OMG, you were right. This is FANTASTIC STUFF.

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tati June 4 2007, 22:34:13 UTC
oh dear, i wish i could write kink this well! i'd never even compete with such excellence :)

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alliwantisanelf June 5 2007, 03:04:54 UTC
I like the way it's full of kink, but it's damned funny too. And then it gets serious, and it's romantic, and it's like all the genre's tumbled together into one!

I feel like I got about 20 fics here all at the same time.

I am damned well ecstatic, that's for sure!

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foxrafer June 3 2007, 10:45:41 UTC
I liked this a lot, particularly how into it Orlando became the more dressed he got. And Viggo being momentarily when they got home: poor thing just didn't know where to start! No guesses to your secret identity but you did a great job.

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alliwantisanelf June 4 2007, 06:21:50 UTC
how into it Orlando became the more dressed he got.

I know! That's the best part, I think. He's so damned turned on by the time he discovers those panties, there's no turning back!

Viggo needs a turn now.

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andatariel June 11 2007, 11:34:01 UTC
Thank you! I'm actually quite overwhelmed by all the comments ... particularly from al! I'm really glad you like it!

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ranger_girl0301 June 4 2007, 02:15:04 UTC
THUD

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alliwantisanelf June 4 2007, 06:22:22 UTC
*JOINS YOU*

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andatariel June 11 2007, 11:35:37 UTC
*Picks you up and dusts you off*

I'm delighted you liked it, and hope you didn't hurt yourself!

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alliwantisanelf June 4 2007, 03:41:57 UTC
Train of thought commenting coming up!

OMG! THE BANNER!!!! *dies* I'm all worked up, and I haven't read a word yet!

AND IT'S GOT VISUAL AIDS (aka links!)

SQUEEEEEEEE!!!!!

MMM...MMMm....MMMMM! the flashback! Famous last words, Elfboy! (have I mentioned I LOVE IT when people call him Elfboy??) You are SOOOO in trouble, baby!

Gimme coffee...oh, thanks love. He's so NEEDY! *rofl*

fishing buddy *has Brokeback Mountain flashback*

doing more on those fishing trips than just dangling bait Oh, they were dangling alright, just not regular worms! They had Night Crawler Supremes!

I'm with Viggo. Those puppy-dog eyes and that trembling pouty lip will look just fine in the things Vig is dreaming up!

I've got lots to say about this fic, so I'm breaking my comments often. Don't want lj eating my words about such a delicious fic--I'm gonna enjoy every drop of this!

*off to part 2*

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andatariel June 11 2007, 11:38:32 UTC
*ROFL*

I'm gonna reply to each of your comments individually - although it will probably take me longer than it did to write the fic in the first place!

I have a very good friend who's not a fellow-slasher, but is a professional graphic designer, and she put the banner together for me. She's had nearly as much fun with this as I did, and I'm working on converting her to the cause!

Okay *takes a deep breath* ... here goes!

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alliwantisanelf June 4 2007, 03:58:09 UTC
lemon poppyseed muffins (for Viggo) and chocolate-coated cereal (for Orlando) If I were at the table, I'd be hard pressed which plate I'd be stealing a bite from!

“‘This could be fun!’” he decided to himself. I knew it. The man's got a fetish!

*cuddles Orlando at the beauty parlour...ow! Waxing!*

Gawd, I'm glad Viggo's driving, 'cause your description there in the car left me totally incapable of operating mechanical equipment. Completely!

the elegant upswept hairstyle contrasting strangely with the ripped jeans, baggy green t-shirt and battered sneakers. He's precioussss! Can I get a picture just like that?

...dubious colour choices *SNORT!*

OMG, I can just SEE him bounding over to the rack and pawing through the clothes like Black Friday morning at the After-Thanksgiving sales!

Okay, I am seriously DYING here....! Puleeze tell me those are the panties from the banner?

*takes a break to catch my breath....*

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andatariel June 11 2007, 11:41:53 UTC
I think I'd be picking from both plates, if it were up to me....

The descriptions are all up to you, hon - you're the one who kept telling me to add more detail in my earlier fics, so I knew you'd like at least some of this!

And yes, those are the panties from the banner - I went "shopping" at Fredericks first, chose all the goodies, and then dressed Orlando in them!

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