For alilacia: Redemption in Paradise

[peppervl]

Disclaimer: The following is a work of fiction. The author has no knowledge of and is making no claims about the real-life activities of anyone depicted herein. This is for entertainment purposes only and no profit has been made.
Rating: The overall rating for this challenge is NC-17. Not all fics are, but some will be.
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Comments

[sarkka]

This was lovely. I liked especially that Orlando was angry with Viggo for not telling at first but didn't let that from saying he wanted them to be together :)

[amato]

Having read this I think I can safely say that now I want to go to the Caymen Islands!!! Now all I need is a boss like Hugo and I won't have to pay for it ;) The style seems to perfectly fit the fic and just adds to the general ambience. Loved how you weaved everyone in there too, was a nice touch.

[alliwantisanelf]

I just love the thought of Orlando's bedroom being a total wreck.

MMMMmmm...Orlando the diving instructor. Y'know, diving can be a very romantic experience. You can't talk, so you have to find other ways of communicating, and it's such a free feeling being held up by the water. (Not to mention the sight of Orlando and Viggo wearing speedos....MMmMMMmmmMMMM!)

“Viggo…just let me…”
There was some awkward manoeuvring as Orlando changed his position and then the next thrust crashed against his prostate and Viggo screamed his appreciation.
“S’ better.” Orlando exclaimed, satisfied “Much better.”

Orlando certainly does aim to please, doesn't he????? Good customer relations...Vig's got that pegged!

I especially liked Dom's reaction to Orlando showing up for the second dive!

Very enjoyable fic! Thanks for writing! I'm looking forward to finding out who you are!

[andatariel]

Ohhhh... hot, wet, suntanned Orli - what more could we want? What a lovely fic - thank you!

[stormatdusk]

this was fun and different; a lot of dialogue, and i liked it that way. it's also begging a sequel - scuba sex sounds like it could be a chapter all its own! :)