you inspire me, mrs. negativity

Nov 28, 2004 19:48

Your poor poor head,
Trapped within a box.
And you swallowed your own key
So shit it out and take a breath of the real world..
Constipated fool.

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k02 November 29 2004, 04:05:22 UTC
That's such a deep Haiku...

Oooooo... so deep.

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earplugs50cents November 29 2004, 04:09:51 UTC
yes, I know Kirstin. I am the next Shiki Masaoka.

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? hookups94 November 29 2004, 19:56:08 UTC
when i first read this i thought it was about me, seeing as how my last post was pretty damn negative. Also the fact that i used the world fool about 80 times in my last entry, and you also chose that word, again makes me think that this poem is about me. Well, if it is, I'm glad I inspire you, and also sorry that you guys have to put up with my negativity. my journal is the only place where i can really get my frustrations out without directly hurting anyone's feelings. I wouldnt feel right telling jorge all these things ...I dont want to hurt his feelings.

p.s. if this poem wasnt about me, then disregard this post, I have a guilty concience for saying all that mean stuff :X

p.p.s. arent haikus 15 sylables, then 17 , then 15 again?

p.p.p.s. Totally random: I went to zaka and saw neckface's book! I want it!!!

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Re: ? k02 November 29 2004, 21:22:34 UTC
Haha, I don't know what a Haiku is.

Seriously.

-_-

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