The Sweetest Relief Part 5

Oct 14, 2009 21:31


I'm kinda switching between writing this and Power of Love at the moment so here's the fifth part of The Sweetest Relief - hope you like! ^^

Title: The Sweetest Relief
Chapter: Chapter 5 - Morning Realisations
Genre: Kind of AU I guess/angsty/sad/fluffy...
Pairing: Ennis/OC, Ennis/Jack
Rating: G or PG for this chapter
Warnings: Slight Ennis/OC and a sad ( Read more... )

the sweetest relief, brokeback mountain

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carmenmariabs October 14 2009, 22:55:42 UTC
Perfect, Ennis emotions very well described.
I have a feeling that something else Ennis guilt or need or yearning ... Ennis is afraid to feel something for Frank, Jack needs to see to confirm their feelings.
Despite the content of this story, I can not help feeling affection, I like the character of Frankie, perhaps the hardest hit.
Thanks

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earthday100 October 18 2009, 14:22:45 UTC
Thankyou very much! ^^
I'm glad you like it and yes, I quite like Frankie too, even though I believe Ennis and Jack are the perfect couple. :)
Hugs, Katie. x

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On the road joetheone October 15 2009, 04:06:14 UTC
I'm glad they are on the road looking for Jack in Texas, I just wonder what Jack will think of Frankie coming along for a ride and helping Ennis and what kind of state he will be in by the time he gets to Texas and finds him. Joe

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Re: On the road earthday100 October 18 2009, 14:23:43 UTC
Thanks for reading and for the comment.
Glad you liked it.
Katie. x

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earthday100 October 18 2009, 14:25:24 UTC
Thanks for reading - glad you liked it! ^^
Yes, poor lil' Ennis! ^^ I wanna hug him too! :D
Thanks,
Katie. x

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apreg October 16 2009, 21:51:25 UTC
I have just found and read all five chapter's of this story and it is amazing, your an amazing writer, how you explain Ennis's emotion is perfect.

beautiful writing.

I hope you had a good day.

*hugs*

Ashley.

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earthday100 October 18 2009, 14:26:23 UTC
Aww, I'm really glad you like the story. Thanks for reading! ^^
Thank you very much for the comment - I appreciate it! :D
Hope you had a good day too.
*more hugs*
Katie. x

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