The Sweetest Relief Part 9

Nov 25, 2009 21:47

Hey, everybody. Both this and The Power of Love are taking a little while now and I'm sorry but I just had no idea how to update them (though I have some type of idea now ^^) The Power of Love next chapter should be put up pretty soon but for now, here's Part 9 of the Sweetest Relief...hope you like :)

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the sweetest relief, brokeback mountain

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earthday100 November 27 2009, 23:22:58 UTC
Something more may happen between them later on too :)
Thanks for reading - glad you like ^^
I do love happy endings (who doesn't?) but you'll have to wait and see !
Hugs
Katie x

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grlewis November 27 2009, 05:36:58 UTC
what a place to end this chapter. i want to read more, more, more and see how things turn out. it's clear that the boys can't stay in the childress area, that's for sure. not with the way these people in childress feel about jack. in fact it's clear that jack shouldn't stay there.

will ennis ever leave alma? i hope he's strong enough to decide he wants to be with jack and he develops the balls to leave the lady.

it's a good thing frankie had just pulled away from jack before ennis came into the room. it could have led to more heartache if they were embracing when ennis entered the room.

it hurts me to see both boys hurting so much. they've just got to work it out. so now, with jack being with frankie when ennis comes to apologize to jack, will there be a three way discussion? will they end up in a three way? what do you have in mind?

this chapter was gripping. gr

gr

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earthday100 November 27 2009, 23:25:13 UTC
Thankyou so much! :) I'll try and get to writing more of this as soon as possible.
Will Ennis leave Alma? You'll have to write and see ^^
And as for the three way...well...you'll have to write and see about that too! ;D
Thanks and hugs,
Katie x

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The sweetest relief argentine65 November 27 2009, 17:50:15 UTC
It is not good for a couple to have somebody around, because we all are humans and mistakes can be make. Thank you so much. Martha

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Re: The sweetest relief earthday100 November 27 2009, 23:23:27 UTC
No problem.
Thanks for reading - glad you like :)
Hugs
Katie x

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