The Power of Love Chapter 18

[earthday100]

Okay, well here's Chapter 18 of The Power of Love. I don't know if I described the emotions as well as they were portrayed in the film but the next chapter will deal with them a little more...
Hope you like this though :)

Title: The Power of Love

Chapter: Chapter 18 - Letting Go

Genre: (for this part) sad/angsty

Pairing: Ennis/Jack

Rating: Teen

Comments

[grlewis]

so i see you wrote the fight just as it unfolded in the story. i was hoping you would write it differently. now all i can hope for is that ennis changes his mind from his actions in the story and he rides off with jack. *hint, hint*

i know you said this story would concentrate on their time on the mountain, so i know it doesn't have much longer to go since they are getting ready to come down.

please change their next major interaction. don't make them part!

gr

[earthday100]

Thanks for reading :)
Glad you like but one little question...I was thinking about going way beyond their time on the mountain, up to the end of the movie (and a lil beyond) if I didn't completely give up but do you think I should just leave it at the end of summer?? I love writing this though and have a lot of other stuff planned out for them if I do, if they have their sweet life at the end of summer or not... ^^
What do you think??
Glad you like though,
Hugs
Katie x

[earthday100]

Thanks for reading. x
You're gonna have to see....should be posting as soon as I can. :)
Katie x