Just The Two of Us (Part 3)

Sep 20, 2009 20:25



Hey well, here's the last part of Just The Two of Us. Hope you like =)

Title: Just The Two of Us (Part 3)

Genre: AU/fluffy/angsty...

Pairing: Ennis/Jack

Rating: R

Warnings: M/m sexual situations but not very graphic at all.

Summary: Ennis is in a state in the tent and Jack is forced to bring out his sensitive side in finding out what’s wrong. (in this ( Read more... )

just the two of us, brokeback mountain

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Emotional ride joetheone September 21 2009, 01:11:41 UTC
You took us on a night of passion and love and hurt and pain all wrapped up in a fine story. Thank you for sharing. joe

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Re: Emotional ride earthday100 September 22 2009, 17:21:31 UTC
No problem! Thanks for reading and for the comment :)
Glad you liked.
Hugs. x

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luvenck September 21 2009, 18:49:50 UTC
Just read your story. What a change and twist from the usual. What started as a severe beating, quietly changed into a beautiful night of passion, and binding them together for a life of wonderful friendship. Cat

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earthday100 September 22 2009, 17:22:25 UTC
Thanks for reading and for your lovely comment :)
I'm really glad you liked it.
Hugs, Katie. x

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grlewis September 22 2009, 23:51:39 UTC
what an emotional night for the boys. ennis vascilating between heaven and hell; jack experiencing his own soft, caring side.

by ending it where you have you have managed to avoid the box of what to do about the beating and aguirre. very clever!

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earthday100 September 23 2009, 19:32:21 UTC
Thanks for reading and for the comment! :)
Glad you liked it.
Hugs. x

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gwylliondream September 23 2009, 17:56:18 UTC
Nice job! I really enjoyed this story. Thanks so much for writing it.

XO
Donna

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earthday100 September 23 2009, 19:32:57 UTC
No problem ^^
Thanks for reading and for the comment
Glad you liked it :)
Hugs, Katie. x

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