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earthday100

The Sweetest Relief Part 2

Oct 05, 2009 20:02

OK, well here's Part 2 of The Sweetest Relief. I'll get back to writing Power of Love at some point but I kinda got a bit carried away with this story *sorry* - hope you like it :D Again, I'm still a little nervous about the whole Ennis/other character thing, especially as it gets a lil' more intense in this part , but I'm just experimenting with ( Read more... )

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Comments 9

carmenmariabs October 5 2009, 21:53:26 UTC

What will happen tomorrow?
What about Jack?
I still feel that Ennis is well with your conscience, no deception between them.
Both are helping.
Jack understand
Alma is ... another story.

earthday100 October 6 2009, 04:10:40 UTC

Thankyou for reading and for the lovely comment.
I'm glad you like it so far - I was very nervous about the whole Ennis with another character plot...
Hugs, Katie.x

grlewis October 5 2009, 23:31:30 UTC

oh boy. ennis' feelings are all over the place. i'm surprised he let himself experience them!

earthday100 October 6 2009, 04:13:09 UTC

Thanks for reading and for the comment! :)
Glad you like it so far.
Hugs, Katie. x

I don't know joetheone October 6 2009, 03:51:56 UTC

I have such a hard time with Ennis being in the bed with another man it upsets me but I will continue reading. I just well, I feel like somehow he is betraying Jack giving him something he does not give Jack. Joe

Re: I don't know earthday100 October 6 2009, 04:08:41 UTC

Thankyou for reading and for the comment. I appreciate the feedback and at the start, I was nervous too about writing about Ennis with another man...
But, if you want to carry on reading, I promise that after a bit, Jack'll somehow manage to find his way into the story - I can't help that! :)
Katie. x

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earthday100 October 6 2009, 21:28:47 UTC

Thankyou very much for reading and for the comment.
It is interesting experimenting with writing about Ennis and another guy (even if I don't really see him doing that type of thing either! ^^) but still, I'm trying to bring Jack into the story later on.
Thanks!
Hugs, Katie. x

luvenck October 7 2009, 16:43:34 UTC

This was kind of hard to grasp. It don't seem right that Ennis so easily Trusted, and Gave himself to another man. We know that Jack is like that, but Ennis......I just don't know. The one positive thing is that Frankie was very sweet, kind, and gentle. But, I still have a problem with Ennis doing that! I will keep reading, and maybe start to understand, and see how it goes. Cat.

earthday100 October 7 2009, 19:29:35 UTC

Thanks for reading.
I can't really see Ennis doing this either but it was really interesting experimenting with writing about him with another guy (and I hate writing about him missing Jack so much :O) Still, I'm trying to bring Jack into the story later on. ^^
If you want to read on, I hope you like it! :)
Hugs, Katie.x