The Sweetest Relief Part 4

Oct 10, 2009 08:39


Hey everybody, here's The Sweetest Relief Part 4 - hope you like ^^ I'm still writing Power of Love but it's taking quite a while so...It'll be here soon though *hopefully* :) Oh and....Jack finally appears in this chapter! Hope you like...

Title: The Sweetest Relief
Chapter: Chapter 4 - The Phonecall
Genre: Kind of AU I guess/angsty/sad/fluffy...
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the sweetest relief, brokeback mountain

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selina31 October 10 2009, 17:56:15 UTC
Finally Ennis is going to see Jack. In the state he is in right know it's good that he brings Frankie along.
Not sure what Jack will think of Frankie though..
Selina

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earthday100 October 10 2009, 21:23:14 UTC
Thanks for reading and for the comment! ^^
I can't stand poor Ennis being sad so I wanted to bring Jack in but I actually quite like Frankie now so...I kept him in too ;D
I'm glad you like it! :)
Hugs, Katie x

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earthday100 October 10 2009, 21:24:17 UTC
Aww, thanks for reading and for the comment :)
I'm really glad you like it and I hope you like the next chapter too! ^^
Hugs, Katie. x

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hampshirerose October 10 2009, 18:52:50 UTC
I am intrigued to see where you are going with this and defininately with Heathyluv on that phonecall and Frankie going too - could be v interesting. Glad to see you are feeling better.

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earthday100 October 10 2009, 21:25:06 UTC
Thankyou for reading and for the comment! :)
I'm glad you like it so far and thankyou for the wishes on feeling better! ^^
Hugs, Katie. x

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carmenmariabs October 12 2009, 20:23:06 UTC
I think during the journey Frank can be a help to Ennis, but before Jack and I think Ennis would burst into guilt, and do not know Jack's reaction.
Love and need

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earthday100 October 13 2009, 19:54:44 UTC
Thankyou! :)
I'm sure Frank will be nice to Ennis. He'll look after him ^^
Glad you like it so far.
Hugs, Katie. x

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blackbird_y May 18 2012, 10:11:29 UTC
Hiya

It's been few years since you wrote this and so far I really like the approach, however..I cringe heavily at the overuse of each other's names. >< I know it kinda portrays desperation but I just can't imagine anyone saying a name that often.

Anyway..off to read the rest :D

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