I can't even begin to explain how amazing this story was. I loved the idea behind it and how both of you wrote it. Jared being a portal was so cool but also frightening when he found out because that thing was scary. I'm glad though that all the characters I liked survived especially Jared, Jensen, Chris, Sebastian and the others. A sequel would be awesome, just saying. Thank you for sharing and for your other friend for the pdf download beacuse this story is most definately a keeper. *hugs*
I'm starting to think a little more of this may be inevitable, lol. We may offer up timestamps at some point in the future, perhaps after I finish my billionty other projects, hehehe.
Okay, this was awesome!! I can't even imagine how scary it was for Jared to be tossed in this strange world and then finding Jensen only to be captured by 'The Service'.
Great world buildung, loyal friends (except Sandy, of course), magic and hot shower sex. Can't ask for more, loved it :D
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Jared being a portal was so cool but also frightening when he found out because that thing was scary.
I'm glad though that all the characters I liked survived especially Jared, Jensen, Chris, Sebastian and the others.
A sequel would be awesome, just saying.
Thank you for sharing and for your other friend for the pdf download beacuse this story is most definately a keeper.
*hugs*
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I agree about a sequel though, so many ideas now I've read it through again, especially concerning Jared's portalness.
Thank you for the comment, hon, glad you enjoyed it!
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:-)
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Thank you!
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Great world buildung, loyal friends (except Sandy, of course), magic and hot shower sex. Can't ask for more, loved it :D
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I loved it and I'm adding my vote for a sequel :)
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