A Picture paints a thousand words

Jun 16, 2013 17:32

Title: A Picture paints a thousand words
Author: eastsidersfan
Rating: Nc17
Word Count: 1825
Summary: Thom & Jeremy .. Missing scene ES Ep 9
Beta: Nope sorry just me so I take all the blame ..
A/Note Part of the Eastsiders Mini Bang.
Disclaimer: I do not own EastSiders, wish I did


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123cariad June 16 2013, 17:26:35 UTC
That was so good loved every word !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Welcome to Lj and welcome to the ES big bang xx

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eastsidersfan June 16 2013, 19:00:55 UTC
Thanks so much .

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valenti1965 June 16 2013, 18:15:28 UTC
1st off welcome to the mini-bang and posting the 1st NC17 fic!!!

Plus it has my fav pairing in also!! Hot sex scene!! *thud*

That picture at the end...does say it all sadly. But yay for the bit before that lol

Thanks for taking part. Loved this! x

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eastsidersfan June 16 2013, 19:01:16 UTC
Thank you for reading

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random_nic June 16 2013, 18:49:11 UTC
Well HOT DAMN - this was a surprise! Firstly that you were able to write so quickly (wow!), and then just that it was ... THIS! I was actually wondering yesterday why I'd set the comm to "adults" since nobody really wrote anything steamy anyway.

You certainly remedied that! Jeremy is probably the most difficult character for me to relate to, and you've done a great job showing us his need for Thom that's equal parts love and desperation here. Thanks for taking part! (And lemme go fix that master fic list LOL)

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eastsidersfan June 16 2013, 19:02:42 UTC
Thank you random_nic sorry it's not beta'd new to this game thanks for reading

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wheelie47 June 16 2013, 19:26:40 UTC
Welcome to LJ! And wow that was a hot story. Well done for showing Jeremy's need to be loved.

Loved this missing scene.

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eastsidersfan June 16 2013, 20:56:15 UTC
Thank for the welcome ..Thank you for reading x

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beautfl_tragedy June 16 2013, 19:57:09 UTC
I really like how you put me in Jeremy's head. He's such a good guy and really loves Thom and you brought that to life here.
Thom is still torn between Jeremy and Cal, but I like this pairing at the moment.
Loved that last paragraph and especially the last line. "ready to unleash untold pain on its buyer."
Great writing and descriptions =)
Thank you for sharing this.

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eastsidersfan June 16 2013, 20:56:58 UTC
Thanks so much for this wonderful comment glad you liked the ending x

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