Ooh, apparently I decided to check on this at just the right time.
I loved the white radiation coming from her eyes while Moss sat in a type of limbo. Death looked so pretty from that dreary little room. It was so bright and gorgeous. A little part of me wanted her to go through the gate just so I could see more of it. However, I'm glad she listened to the possible skeleton-boy. I'm quite curious about his story, now. Is he one of the skeletons? And if so, what did Ines (and/or the Dark Council) do to him?
Wow you really did check at the right time, Lol! And thanks so much, I didn't realize that I had glamorized death. I too am glad that Moss listened to him or else the story would have been taken in a very different direction beyond that gate. Would be kind of interesting though...
You'll have to keep reading to see what this guy is all about. ;)
Oooh amazing. Once again, your chapter is just beautiful. I felt so sorry for Moss. The stranger is really interesting, I'm wondering who he is, if he's related to her somewhat.
Thanks so much, it makes me really happy that you compliment on my story because I think so highly of your work, from your ideas, to your writing and pictures :) And don't worry, this mystery man will be featured more!
I've got a guess of who the guy is - and it only makes me think that Ines is more horrible than I already thought. The fact that he looks kind of like Moss is what made me think so ... I really hope I'm wrong :(
Great chapter :) I really like what you did with Moss' eyes; I actually thought they were a different set of eyes until I looked closely at some of the shots.
More will come of this guy later most likely. ;D Thank you! I had a lot of fun with the effects on this chapter, perhaps I went a little too out but I really wanted the images to stand out as Moss lingering between life and death.
The black-haired boy will be revealed at some point - may be! ;D And thank you, I had a lot of fun with this chapter's effects, from doing her eyes to the environment.
OH WOW. I just read up on all the 12 chapters and I must say this is really good! >D I can't wait to see how Orin comes into play...and what about Moss's 'father'? Is he in on this? Becuase he always seemed so sad...maybe he'll have a change of heart? Hmm.
And that mysterious guy in Limbo...that must be Moss's brother (they look alike). Ho hum. Pity he's hot. D: Second hot guy comes into the story and he's dead already. dannggg. XD
Can't wait to see what happens next! Great writing bb. :D
You read all twelve chapters in one sitting? :o I am so flattered! Your questions though will be answered in future chapters for the most part, including those pertaining to Hot Guy™. ;D
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I loved the white radiation coming from her eyes while Moss sat in a type of limbo. Death looked so pretty from that dreary little room. It was so bright and gorgeous. A little part of me wanted her to go through the gate just so I could see more of it. However, I'm glad she listened to the possible skeleton-boy. I'm quite curious about his story, now. Is he one of the skeletons? And if so, what did Ines (and/or the Dark Council) do to him?
Ah! Lovely, lovely update!
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You'll have to keep reading to see what this guy is all about. ;)
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Great chapter :) I really like what you did with Moss' eyes; I actually thought they were a different set of eyes until I looked closely at some of the shots.
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And that mysterious guy in Limbo...that must be Moss's brother (they look alike). Ho hum. Pity he's hot. D: Second hot guy comes into the story and he's dead already. dannggg. XD
Can't wait to see what happens next! Great writing bb. :D
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