Comments | ebondage: Here, have attempted poetry

ebondage

Oct 15, 2009 01:05

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Comments 5

greenandkeen October 15 2009, 02:02:58 UTC

I like what you've done since first draft. Nice

ebondage October 15 2009, 03:59:27 UTC

Thanks....it's not really done, but sure :)

janey_mac October 15 2009, 11:40:09 UTC

Nice! I like the new last stanza. :)

niamhybeag October 15 2009, 14:50:44 UTC

Oooohhhh.... that's lovely.

dorianegray October 15 2009, 19:01:39 UTC

Nice work.