Weird stuff from me.

Aug 13, 2005 23:52

I honestly don't know what I was thinking when I wrote this. There's nothing about it that's the least bit special.

Perhaps there will be another entry this month when if I can come up with something for graffittidec.

Description: No one dies of a broken heart, no one dies over a lost love. Or, in Mike’s case, lost loves. [Standalone]

Numerology and the Life Aquatic )

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jun_ko August 14 2005, 04:27:18 UTC
That... that was so fucking twisted! Awesome! I grew suspecious from the second flashback, about Brad going and joining Chester in the ocean. At first, I thought Chester has just left Mike for a beach resort or something (XD;;) but that didn't sound right... then Brad went, too, and the first thing my unstable paranoid mind did was scream "MIKE DROWNED THEM!!" and I was so right. XP

I really love how this turned out. It seems unlike to me that Mike would be having affairs with his bandmates (at least... all of them...) but they way you wrote it, not too detailed and everything, makes it very general and plausible, so that's a brilliant touch.

The ending was the best, too. And the beginning -- what really drew me in was the line about not dying of heartbreak, because I myself am currently working on a story and strangely enough, it opens with "you can't die from pain, no matter what," or something similar... O_o;; Freaky. *pokes you*

Great job, dear!! <333

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