I honestly don't know what I was thinking when I wrote this. There's nothing about it that's the least bit special.
Perhaps there will be another entry this month when if I can come up with something for graffittidec.
Description: No one dies of a broken heart, no one dies over a lost love. Or, in Mike’s case, lost loves. [Standalone]
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Numerology and the Life Aquatic )
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I really love how this turned out. It seems unlike to me that Mike would be having affairs with his bandmates (at least... all of them...) but they way you wrote it, not too detailed and everything, makes it very general and plausible, so that's a brilliant touch.
The ending was the best, too. And the beginning -- what really drew me in was the line about not dying of heartbreak, because I myself am currently working on a story and strangely enough, it opens with "you can't die from pain, no matter what," or something similar... O_o;; Freaky. *pokes you*
Great job, dear!! <333
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