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ebony_miasma

Feedback would be appreciated.

Oct 21, 2005 11:42

Title: To Err Is Human
Author: ebony_miasma
Rating: PG-13 (subject to change)
Description: A friendship undergoes the ultimate test. Will the situation tear them apart? Or will they be able to forgive and accept?
Author’s Note: This story isn’t slash. I wanted to do a non-slashy story that focused more on a test friendship rather than Mike and ( Read more... )

Comments 3

decadentdreams November 1 2005, 01:44:52 UTC

Wow, I'm late on this. I was so busy last week (week before last?? I'm so lost!), but I knew I didn't want to miss anything you write so I just saved it for now. ^^

I really liked this start. It is a start, isn't it? Because I want more of this. I want the whole story! It's obvious you've thought this out quite well and I would love to see more of how their relationship develops and changes now that life has become something that they didn't expect, when they find that they have to work to stay together. Savannah seems like she'd be an interesting character, as she's obviously independent enough to make her own choices (and catch a rock star for a boyfriend!) yet I'm not convinced she's fully prepared for the consequences of those choices. I hope you do write more! :)

ebony_miasma November 3 2005, 22:29:35 UTC

Yes, it is a start. It would develop more if my computer had not crashed last week, lol. Good thing I posted this somewhere so I can retrieve it.

And I'm glad you like it so far. What I have in mind is something that had been really nagging me and was triggered by mutliple things. I hope to have the next chapter up within a few days of getting the computer back.

Oh, and I must add that your icon is HOT. He looks so... sad. It's way inspiring. :D

decadentdreams November 4 2005, 04:49:24 UTC

Oh, good! I mean, not about your computer crash (that sucks BIGtime!), but rather because I look forward to reading more of this soon then. :)

Rhea is responsible for my icon - I could never make something like that. It is inspiring, isn't it? *staresforhours* I just realized - the way his one eye is shadowed makes it possible to believe he has a black eye. Okay, that was way too random. Update soon. 'kay, thanks. :)