[Week 96] [Drabble - Torn]

[lin_yun]

Title: “Forever” is a Fairytale.
Author: Sango Shadowphoenix
Word count: 455 (*does a double-take* Really? I thought I did 1000+ for sure! Lol!)
Rated ‘E’ for Everyone
Universe: Doesn’t make a diff.
Disclaimer: InuYasha and its characters belong to Takahashi-sensei.

Summary: Kagome has faith in Sesshoumaru’s character. Even when Sesshoumaru has

Comments

[redsn0wflakes]

Awww....I love this to bits! I love how you gradually show us what happened through their dialogue (very clever). I love how Sesshoumaru, for once, lost control and accidentally hurt her [ahem] during sex. Lol...the mere idea is so funny/cute/semi-romantic. And I love how bittersweet it is, that they both know they don't have forever but accept that. <3

Mem-ing this!

[lin_yun]

"Awww!!" right back at you! You left such a sweet comment, thank you! *hugs* I'm very happy you liked it - so much! ^__^

And, because it was so nice, the phrase deserves repeating and its own paragraph:

Thank you~!

[la89801]

That was awesome! I love Sesshomaru, and you write magnificently!

[lin_yun]

I'm very happy you liked it, and thank you very much for your compliments! An author always especially likes it when readers compliment the writing, not just the written~ lol! ^__^

[replicantangel]

Eek. The nature of her injury gives me the creeps (I have a thing about veins). But this is really fantastic - showing both sides of his nature and how his concern for her wins out over anything. Awesome job!

[lin_yun]

Thank you very much for the compliments! ^__^

[saholia]

For some reason, I want to cry for them both. Because they know they don't have forever, and they're doing the best they can in the meanwhile. But I love how you described both their characters--very nice!

[lin_yun]

Thank you! I'm very happy to have been able to write something that touched you so. It means my writing still has hope yet! lol!