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Fic: Wish You Were Here

Apr 15, 2007 17:48

Title: Wish You Were Here
Fandom: CSI: Miami
Pairing: Eric/Ryan
Prompt: #8 loss (
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subj: pair: eric/ryan, rating: pg, challenge: 20estrel, fic: csi: miami

Comments 11

eviinsanemonkey April 15 2007, 23:39:58 UTC

awww, that's so sad, and so sweet! Great job!

ebonymist April 16 2007, 02:10:16 UTC

Thanks! :D

sharpiesgal April 16 2007, 01:38:54 UTC

That was beautiful and painful at the same time.

You got into their heads and I could picture this scene so vividly.

Good work.

ebonymist April 16 2007, 02:12:52 UTC

Wow, thanks! I'm glad you liked it! I'm not used to having such dialogue-based fics, so I'm glad I managed to get into their heads and paint the picture despite that. :)

courtberger April 16 2007, 01:57:37 UTC

So sweet! I loved it!

C~

ebonymist April 16 2007, 02:13:33 UTC

Thank you! *biggrin*

alligator138 April 16 2007, 05:39:01 UTC

Awwww, that's what they should do - talk and listen and hold each other. Sometimes I want to slap them, but this time I want to cheer. Lovely!

ebonymist April 17 2007, 00:36:17 UTC

lol Sometimes I want to slap them, too. I'm glad you liked this, though. I think in this case, they've had enough trouble, and they just needed to be happy. ;)

persikay April 16 2007, 11:30:40 UTC

Aww, that was sad, but at least they managed to sort things out.

ebonymist April 17 2007, 00:37:43 UTC

Yes, it was sad, but you're right. They ended up happy, or at least on their way there, so it worked out. :)