Fic: Invisible, Part 21/22

[ebonymist]

Title - Invisible, Part 21
Rating - PG-13
Pairing - Eric/Ryan, mentions of Speed/Horatio
Spoilers - Nailed, No Man's Land/Man Down, and (very slightly) Broken Home
Disclaimer - Yes, they're mine. I own them. *evil laughter*
Summary - The moment you've all been waiting for... :)
Word Count - 3,003
Notes - beta'd by 

Comments

[persikay]

*happy sigh*
That last part is so true, lol.
But aww, just one more part after this? I can't believe it.

[ebonymist]

I know, I can't believe it either! Wow... it's been my baby since like November and now... *tear* It's almost over.

*stares at long line of bunnies waiting to be written* Erm... maybe it's a good thing it's almost over, lol.

[i_heart_ng]

Ryan rolled his eyes. “When you say it like that it sounds naughty.”
You're not fooling me, Ryan. You love it when Eric talks naughty ;)

This was a great chapter. I like how the just slipped back into the relationship and love that they established in the Dream and it wasn't awkward or anything. Very nice.

[ebonymist]

Yeah, I'll bet Ryan loves it when Eric talks naughty. ;P

Glad you like it, thanks. :D

[shadowfax27]

Aww, I'm so happy they finally talked about the dream. I liked how you explained why Ryan's fear had taken the form of Tim Speedle. It makes sense.

And these lines had me grinning: Ryan rolled his eyes. “When you say it like that it sounds naughty.” The look on Eric’s face told Ryan that’s precisely how he meant it. “Don’t tell me you’re jealous of a woman I saw a total of three times.” Eric didn’t answer, but Ryan didn’t really need him to. “You are, aren’t you?”

Looking forward to the last chapter. =)

[ebonymist]

Good, I'm glad it makes sense. :) And wow.. It's still kind of hard to believe it's almost over...

Anyway, thanks for reading! :D

[courtberger]

This was exactly what I needed today, so sweet! I love how Ryan wanted to help with dinner and Eric wasn't going to let him. So adorable!

I love this! I'm looking forward to the next chapter too! :)

*smile*

Court

[ebonymist]

Thank you! :) Glad you like it!

[alligator138]

I love this! This story keeps getting better and better! I love that they finally talked about the dream and about their feelings for each other. I love that Eric's looking after Ryan and Ryan's letting him. *squees*

Well done sweetie!

[ebonymist]

lol, Thank you! *grins*