Fic: Five Symptoms John Sheppard Isn't Used to Having

[eccentricweft]

This was inspired, oddly, by spuffyduds' hilarious Five Planets Atlantis is Never Contacting Again, or at Least If They Do, They're Sending Another Damn Team, Not John's. (Go read it!)

I don't have the gift of writing humor (this is h/c instead) but the other thing I admired about Five Planets... was that there was a story arc in the progression of the five

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Five Symptoms John Sheppard Isn't Used to Having

[aqualegia]

Lovely! I love that John gives in to temptation and Rodney manages to make everything all right.

Re: Five Symptoms John Sheppard Isn't Used to Having

[eccentricweft]

Rodney knows John so well! and the parts John's hiding, the moment he lets them show, Rodney understands completely. He's brilliant like that. :)

[tarlanx]

Love John's slow epiphany, and that last part was wonderful!

[eccentricweft]

I'm so pleased you liked it!

[accidentalfan]

*does the toe-curl of happy* All of those symptoms certainly sound like love-sickness to me. :)

[eccentricweft]

Oh oh, I didn't think of that - love-sickness! yes, absolutely that's what John's got!

[skeddy_kat]

Very nicely done.

[eccentricweft]

Thank you!

[lysambre]

Beautiful piece.

The way John just cannot say anything casual was just heart-wrenching.

Thank you :).

[eccentricweft]

It always makes me shiver when John lets his feelings show... (on the show I mean, like in The Shrine)

I'm glad you liked it!