First fic (contains episode 8 spoilers)

Apr 12, 2007 12:30

Okay, so after my little rant below, I felt I had to write the Gene/Sam scene that I though the final episode demanded. It is also born out of the fact that I thought Gene's reaction to Ray's revelation was not at all as shocked as I exepected. So here it is.

Title: Compromise
Rating: Um, probably a 12ish for quite a bit of swearing.
Disclaimer: These ( Read more... )

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freefalling85 April 12 2007, 12:39:00 UTC
Y'know what, you're right - this scene was missing from the finale.

GREAT FIC! and for a first attempt? bloody brilliant! you got them in character really well too :D

Really like this - I love the feel of it as well. And that last sentence *rocks my socks* :D

Yay you! :D

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echo_voice April 12 2007, 13:24:34 UTC
Thank you very much - I was worried that they were both a bit too mushy to be in character, so I'm glad you think I got it right!

The last sentence is my favorite too.

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bistokids April 12 2007, 12:41:13 UTC
Really great - it was strongly in my head that this scene needed to happen too. I loved the way you weaved some canon through it, and particularly the fact that some of the things Gene has said (You could go back any time you wanted etc) show that Gene already knew. Which I believe, as much as I believe anything in this confused twisted world!

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echo_voice April 12 2007, 13:28:38 UTC
I don't really know where the idea that Gene knew all along came from. It kind of just popped up and I ran with it, manipulating little bits of canon as I went and in the end I just liked it as a theory, so I'm glad you did too!

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lo0o0ony_lauren April 12 2007, 12:54:05 UTC
Ooh, very nice. I utterly agree that this was missing. XD

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nin_o_zara April 12 2007, 13:07:12 UTC
That is awesome, a scene like that was begging to be written.

I certanly did enjoy it!

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ailcia April 12 2007, 13:14:15 UTC
Excellent stuffs, and entirely the only thing missing from the finale. Well done!

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