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ecto_gammat

I Ate the Fruits of Forbidden Knowledge, Or Discovered the Hidden Truth

Sep 08, 2011 13:49

Title: I Ate the Fruits of Forbidden Knowledge, Or Discovered the Hidden Truth
Fandom: M*A*S*H
Pairing: Hawkeye/Trapper
Rating: PG
Challenge: Prompt #304 for slashthedrabble
Length: 500 words
Summary: War can be a cruel mistress.
Notes: Title and cut text from Ljósfari by Sólstafir. Please note the Disclaimer located here. Also, this fic is un-beta'd, so any ( Read more... )

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Comments 6

rosehiptea September 8 2011, 18:12:06 UTC

I really like this. I especially like the lines about the different kinds of love, and how Hawkeye and Trapper might have found each other. Definitely IC.

ecto_gammat September 9 2011, 02:41:33 UTC

Thank you very much!

gandolforf September 9 2011, 04:33:39 UTC

Very nice! I don't often see second-person that fits well, but you did beautifully here.

ecto_gammat September 9 2011, 15:29:12 UTC

Thank you!

fear3loathing October 31 2011, 09:58:17 UTC

I enjoyed this, I wasn't sure I would at first, but the way you set it out actually worked very well. It seemed natural, not forced, and had just enough of about everything in it. Sad but sweet.

ecto_gammat October 31 2011, 16:00:16 UTC

Thank you very much! I'm glad you enjoyed it =)