After The Storm

[eddue]

You promised me a rainbow

Comments

[vixenzpistol]

Brilliant use of adjectives. Beautifully laced with metaphors. It's easy to relate to and I adore this one.

[eddue]

I really appreciate your comments. Being male, it's a stretch to write from a feminine point of view. I thought that would be the best way to present this. The theme was about domestic violence and how it's survivors, and those who didn't!

[wsdante]

Lump-in-the-throat time there.

I particularly like the way you slipped in 'reign' for 'rain'.

[eddue]

Thanks. This work is more serious and personal. Glad to share it with you.