Cocoon

[eddue]

Long journey, small steps

Comments

[vixenzpistol]

I enjoyed this. The last line was where most of the impact was found though. and even though it didn't actually describe it left the impression and feeling (while reading it) of bursting out of yourself and the struggle to do it.Very nice.

[eddue]

I think you understood what I was trying to say. Being in a state of transition. And being overcome by the transformation.

Thanks so much!

[eddue]

I wasn't sure if the last line was the right ending. I thought it might be too understated. Maybe it works better than I thought.