Five Times Jeff Tried to Propose (And One Time He Succeeded)

[edenofalltrades]

Title: Five Times Jeff Tried to Propose (And One Time He Succeeded)
Author: edenofalltrades
Pairing:Jeff/Annie
Spoilers: I wrote the story before season 4 started airing but I edited it after that so there are some very minor spoilers from the first few episodes of season 4.
Rating/Warnings: Teen/PG-13. It’s fairly mild but there is minor course

Comments

[fangirl_101]

This is so sweet I think I just got a cavity :)

I really loved this! I loved all the different scenarios. They never seemed overdone or over the top; what I mean is I could actually see all those things happening, especially Thanksgiving when Abed rearranged the whipped cream on all the slices so one didn't look obviously different. That was such a perfectly Abed thing to do! I hope you write more J/A fic! You have a wonderful grasp of the characters and your writing is terrific :)

[edenofalltrades]

Thank you so much! I'm really glad you liked it! I actually have another story that's almost ready so I'll post it up in the relatively near future. :)

[iknowitsbutters]

Favored this on ff.net, easily favor it here too. You were right to be proud of it, just as your readers have to be proud of Jeff too.

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[edenofalltrades]

Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked the story enough to favorite it. :)

[claymay83]

Just finished reading this and loved it. Abed rearranging all the pieces of pie is exactly what he'd do. Loved that after all his attempts, it finally happened in such a simple but loving way. Hope to see you writing more stories in the future.

[edenofalltrades]

Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked how it ended. I'm definitely going to try to put up more stories - these reviews certainly are a good incentive. :)