Presentation Piece, Monday, 7 December: The Sad Lady

[edgeofthewood]

Our class format has changed, so we're no longer doing in-class writing every meeting. But here's what I submitted for last night's critique session.

Comments

[keristor]

Whoof! That is beautiful. Sad but beautiful. Poetic.

[divsy]

This is such a beautiful piece. It has stayed with me since yesterday.

[tigerbright]

The character of the narrator really comes through here simply from the way she talks. I'm even more impressed with that than with the story itself.

[fourzoas]

Really lovely!