Fic: Before I Sleep (Mensa-verse) (PG)

[ediblewolfpeach]

Title: Before I Sleep (Mensa-verse)
Author: R. Tom Mato
Characters: Mensa!Weir, Mensa!Sheppard, Rod McKay
SGA-verse or MENSA-verse: Mensa-verse
Rating: PG
Warnings: Character death, but that's rather obvious.
Summary:
Notes: For the Stargate: Mensalantis challenge at Mensa_au. I couldn’t think of a title and I wanted this posted before I went to bed, so

Comments

[adafrog]

Love it. Thanks.

[ediblewolfpeach]

Hee, thank you. :)

[neek_love]

Much love for this fic! Nice team bonding :)

[ediblewolfpeach]

Go team! Thanks. ^^

[trobadora]

Oh, that is so lovely.

[ediblewolfpeach]

Thank you. :)

[nakedwesley]

Ooh, that was good! Nice touch, making John afraid to fly. Of course Rod is smart enough to figure it out. I like the little bit about the science fair and John's grandmother, and that last line is perfect. :o)

[ediblewolfpeach]

There is much angst and backstory about the flying, *nod* but it did not fit, so it is in the spare parts box. lol I'm glad you liked it, thanks.

[blackpapertiger]

very cool, good explorations of subtle differences, and I like John as afraid of flying. I think my favorite, though, was John arguing that he shouldn't be there, because he's not Elizabeth's friend. definitely a good take on teh characters.

[ediblewolfpeach]

I think my favorite, though, was John arguing that he shouldn't be there, because he's not Elizabeth's friend.

Yes, that was my favorite, too. :) I'd hoped John would seem a little closer to them at the end (not that he'll be hanging out with them or, y'know, actually talking to them. More along the lines that "hey, my bosses are people, too!"). I'm glad you liked it and I'm very glad the fear of flying went over well. I wanted to explain it, but it just didn't fit in with the story so I axed it. *sigh*

Thanks. :)