Fic: The Minutes Are Free After Seven (G)

[ediblewolfpeach]

Title: The Minutes Are Free After Seven
Author: R. Tom Mato
Rating: G
Warnings: Not really, no.
Summary: AU, Earth-based. John and Rodney meet and start dating. Told through phone calls to their mutual friend, Teyla.
Notes: Written for the Dating Challenge on sga_flashfic, but I messed up on the posting so I'll post it here (sorry for that). Dialogue-only and

Comments

[demilo19]

*pets the silly boys*

Poor Teyla! She is really too sweet for her own good. I would have killed them but apparently she has patience. Loving this, btw. I hope it continues!

[ediblewolfpeach]

lol I don't think Rodney would have survived if he called me at one in the morning, either. I love sleep too much. Teyla is sweet; she has her reasons for not letting them know (though she will, oh she will) and they are good, noble reasons!

Everyone needs a Teyla. :) Thanks.

[dajaje]

This was great! I loved the way you captured the guys' personalities just through their conversations with Teyla. Telling a story via dialog only is hard, but you did a wonderful job. I would love to read more! :)

[ediblewolfpeach]

The problem for me with dialogue is that I tend to run on forever--which is why I cut it so suddenly where I did. Smaller installments might be good if I manage to continue this. Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. :)

[ediblewolfpeach]

I may post that, if it works. I do hate leaving things unfinished when there's so much in my head.

Thanks!

[yinkawills]

Hey,
Please don't stop in the middle! It was just getting interesting :)

Yinka

[ediblewolfpeach]

I'm working on seeing how it'll go. Thanks. :)

[khyrra]

Eee! So cute! I love the format, and I love how Teyla's not letting them in on the fact that she knows them both. So Teyla, I can just picture her with that Mona Lisa smile. I'd love to read more!

[ediblewolfpeach]

I'm not really sure how she does it, but that is Teyla. :) I'm glad you like it, thanks!