Comments | ediblewolfpeach: Ficlet: Bedtime (PG)

ediblewolfpeach

Mar 09, 2007 04:09

Title: Bedtime
Author: R. Tom Mato
Rating: PG
Warnings: Crying children (but they stop, finally). Kid!fic.
Notes: Just something I wondered about with all the kid!fics I've seen. Usually the patterns in who gets kidified(?) and who's left watching over them.

( He whispered apologies and kept his excuses to himself, because he *wasn't* good at this and why was *he* put in charge of three very fragile people? )

Comments 9

berlinghoff79 March 9 2007, 12:26:43 UTC

Weehee!! Temper tantrum!!!

I like that Meredith's the quite one even when he's crying.

Me luvs.

jayel_fox March 10 2007, 04:28:06 UTC

I love the image of baby-Teyla angry and defiant while the boys burst into tears so much that I had to draw it for you: here on my journal

darsnape_dracul March 12 2007, 04:10:52 UTC

I agree with the others, Rodney as the one who knows how to cry quietly is precious in so many ways.

lamaudite March 17 2007, 13:04:01 UTC

All good and well done, but this one is my favourite of the three. Cheers!

margarks July 17 2010, 20:39:14 UTC

awww! poor ronon! I love them as kids and can totally picture ronon reacting this way :)