Question for the linguists in my f-list

Aug 28, 2005 04:10

I was reading over something I wrote some time ago, and I found this sentence ( Read more... )

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dsorbara August 28 2005, 07:59:58 UTC
ooh! grammar! This is my specialty...since that's my job.

The sentence is correct without the comma. When you have to adjectives together, you usually put a comma in between them: they're called coordinating adjectives.

For example: The cloudy, rainy day was terrible.

The words cloudy and rainy modify the noun day. However, the words cold and February do not modify morning. Only cold is a modifier. Cold modifies the phrase February morning. So, you don't need the comma.

Hope that helps.

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tjackson August 28 2005, 08:09:47 UTC
is it bad that I knew that, but didn't have any idea how to say it eloquently?

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dsorbara August 28 2005, 18:38:59 UTC
Don't worry, I'm a copy editor, so my only task in life is to examine and interpret grammar and ideas. Plus, I'm a huge nerd.

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eduthepenguin August 28 2005, 08:10:09 UTC
Hmmmm, lack of capitalization, mistaking "to" and 'two". Are you sure it's your specialty?

:D Just kidding!

And yes, it does help. Thanks, Diego!

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nvr2blonde August 28 2005, 14:23:32 UTC
Actually, both are correct.

It all depends on the context of what you are writing. For example, if you are talking strictly about mornings and then being cold (and it happens to be in Feb.), then a "cold February morning" works.

If you are writing something that for some reason has something to do with, for example, another month, (i.e., it's Christmas time and you are reflecting back on something that happened earlier that year), then "cold, February morning" works as well.

Commas do have strict placement, but that refers more to overuse or misuse. They can also be used very effectively as a way to add "voice" to your writing.

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sparklyoctopus August 28 2005, 16:02:47 UTC
What everyone has said is right, but I thought I'd throw in what I always tell the international students when I tutor them in writing - the rules are irrelevant..."cold February morning" is the accepted way of writing it (here in America anyway, I'm not responsible for funky people who put extra U's in things, lol). It's just the way we do it, grammatically flawless or not.

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eduthepenguin August 28 2005, 20:29:48 UTC
I have a subject called "Research and Writing", this semester. For the most part it's basically a rehash of all the grammar and spelling rules most of us should've learned in high school. However, it takes it one step beyond by dealing with most of the more subtle "rules"; that is, learning where putting commas and stuff isn't right or wrong, but stylistically appropiate. In the end it's all up to the writer whether a comma is appropiate in those instances, so the class ends up always boiling down to 30 minute discussions of who is "more right". It's all very frustrating because we never get anywhere and because the teacher is an idiot.

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sparklyoctopus August 29 2005, 19:32:07 UTC
Oh man. Make him stop. Legalize him into submission or something.

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