My Sweet Roller-Skating Muse

[edward_shaddow]

She stood at the edge of a swarming sea of cheep Armani suits. The fetor of a hundred different aftershaves mingled in the air, giving the small cafeteria a thick musky atmosphere. She felt sickly as the underlying stench of pure male sweat reached her nose. It reminded her of the Dojo after training, although the men there did not wear aftershave

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Well I read it 5 times before commenting....hope its not to brutal :-)

[anonymous]

Spell Check - it sucks but can be done! I believe in spell check because as you know I am a crap at spelling

Re: Well I read it 5 times before commenting....hope its not to brutal :-)

[edward_shaddow]

Finally some one who can give good, constructive feedback, and still like what I churn out. That's it. You are now my #1 fan and chief editor. Before any more posts I am going to run everything by you.

I might write a prequel to this story. Telling of the mysterious and powerful cult of the Llama. The Gods must be obeyed.

Re: Well I read it 5 times before commenting....hope its not to brutal :-)

[anonymous]

Editor?

Okay as long as I get paid and don't have do any work.

the golden llama's stomach grumbled as she twisted it open....inside was a tiny key with which she could use keep her promise......

If you send it...it shall be edited!

nawwww that means I have to use spell checker toooooo......!

Re: Well I read it 5 times before commenting....hope its not to brutal :-)

[edward_shaddow]

Haha - you wish. Your job as editor is to make my scribble palatable :)
You will work for love. Love and candy. Sam ate your candy. She has your hugs too.

My stomach is never gonna live that down is it? :/

If I email it, she will edit.

I use spell checker, damn thing doesnt work obviously!!! Grrrr >_