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eertyecal

FICTION: THE RIGHT NUMBER

Jan 21, 2009 21:33

I am still struggling with Represent & Defend, but I'm still writing. In the meantime the following fiction came from an idea that jumped into my brain after the ridiculous scenes from yesterday & Coopth's dinner at Towers. This is my own version of Coop's reservations at Towers. Hope you like it.

Title: The Right Number
Rating: PG
Author: Eertyecal
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fiction, coop & ashlee

Comments 6

angelzqq January 22 2009, 03:16:32 UTC

Great story. What a great surprise that was when she turned around and it was Ashlee. I love surprises *grins* Yayyyy Tracy *hugs*

eertyecal January 22 2009, 14:18:41 UTC

Thank you for the lovely comment Sharon. I appreciate you taking the time to read my story and share your thoughts. I couldn't allow Coop to waste his money on Ick. In my world that would just never happen! *grin*. I'm glad you were surprised. **hugs**

jailynn24 January 22 2009, 13:33:27 UTC

I got so giddy when I realized what you were doing with the switch. As soon as he pushed send I was like "awww, Ashlee!" This story was amazing fluffy goodness and I loved every single second of it. Brilliant job, Tracy. ***hugs*** You rock!

eertyecal January 22 2009, 14:24:18 UTC

We think too much alike. I had you fooled for all of what, 5 or 6 words? *grin* I'm glad you liked the story. As soon as I heard Coop ask Beth to Towers, I was like that's a wrong I just have to right, hence the story. TIIC had Beth dressed in a lavender dress which just washed her out even more, if that's possible, and half the chest of the dress was missing in order to try and enhance her strawberry-sized breasts *yuk*. Needless to say they would have had to just cut-off the top of the dress entirely before anyone noticed her chest. It's all disgusting, but it has inspired me to write.....what should really be happening. Thanks for the comment love. **hugs**

jyl22075 January 22 2009, 14:24:17 UTC

That was incredibly sweet, Tracy! Coop has lost his mind on GL, but you have given it back. *grin*

eertyecal January 22 2009, 14:34:36 UTC

In my mind, I have started calling him Pooc, because he's completely the opposite of our Coop. The fact that he's not completely fed up with Beth's constant blubbering about Allen like she's on the verge of a nervous breakdown, just baffles me. It's a tribute to JD's talent that he can even act out this crap. Thanks for the comment Jenny. I'm so glad you liked the story. **hugs**