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[ego_magnificent]

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[snow_meow]

I think this should pass for your friend.

I like this fic.
I think it is sweet and I love Yunho's definition of home.

Changmin's definition of home is so Changmin..."warm food comes from" ^_^

[ego_magnificent]

thanks for reading! ^^ I hope it does pass with my friend! because I want KangTeuk!!! haha xD

and yeah i think changmin's definition is so cute! min is full of such aegyo even if he doesn't realize

[beeswaxing]

Lol!!! Jackie that was so cute and I see where your YunJae sidelined your HoMin lmao. We had opposite problems indeed. I kinda wanted to kick Jae a little for being a selfish prat but then I also completely understood where he was coming from. Max is adorable hahahaha and Yunho is Yunho. I hate writing AU too tbh. It's a damn struggle and IDK why I do it to myself. I really liked this though. Lighthearted and cute with the usual YunJae angst no one seems to be able to avoid but it works.

Though I really don't know if Honey would consider this HoMin :P

[beeswaxing]

I hate cOmmenting on my phone cos it always ends prematurely.

ICWUDT btw :P Jae leaving, Chami is Yunho's home and tbh, even I won't dispute that. Parallels with RL even though it's baby AU! and your writing is not like AFF so don't say that to me you silly goose! :P I hope you get a beautiful KangTeuk out of this. I'm just sorry I can't do it myself. Fic exchanges are fun. Funny how Honey got HoMin out of both of us!

[ego_magnificent]

yeah. yunjae was a pest! there was even a yunjae kiss in there but i took it out >< lol Yunho is Yunho indeed. and i think I always write Jae as selfish. Which is unfair to him. I need to take Jae writing classes.

As for the RL parallels... I think it's good for AU to have them because it helps keep the characters... in character. And also it keeps it interesting since you're already a fan of the characters and whatever trials they went through.

Yeah I'm a bit sad we can't fic exchange. I don't mind writing for others but I only want to be paid in SJ fics ><

As for Honey... haha we'll have to wait and see. Thanks for reading ^^

[n3uromanc3r]

It was really lovely, your female Changmin was so adorable... : D

Thank you very much!

[ego_magnificent]

^^ i'm glad you liked her! thanks for reading

[ego_magnificent]

thanks for saying that. that is a very kind comment. i am touched because it makes me sound wiser than I am hahaha. thanks for reading ^^

[trish3815]

this is so sweet... you made Max a girl.... love how he explained what home was to him..
it was okay that it didn't have any romance in it it was still a good one.. thanks for
sharing..

[ego_magnificent]

thanks for reading and finding it cute ^^