Ficlet | Clear (AntiChristmas)

[egotists]

Title: Clear
Author: egotists
Gift recipient: keerawa
Characters/Pairing : Sam&(/)Dean (However you choose), Bobby
Rating: PG-13 for language
Warnings: Angst
Summary: Dean's tired of the painful rhythm.
Note: Dear Keerawa, I'm incredibly sorry I'm late with this. I feel absolutely awful that it's not more but I wanted to give you at least something so I hope you

Comments

[egotists]

Yay! I'm glad to hear that.

[kalliel]

I don't apply the word 'beautiful' to SPN that often--and mostly when there are fics whose prose might be considered beautiful, it jars, doesn't fit, doesn't ring true. But beautiful this is, and even more so for its truth.

These lines really caught me:

There's days, like this one, where it's especially hard. Standing on the edge of the apocalypse, barely an inch from choices that could make or break the rest of their lives, the world's lives.

They fight, too often, about these things.

They're the sort that stick in your mind, and you still remember them hours after reading.

Extremely powerful look at Dean, as well as Sam. Thank you for writing this!

[egotists]

Oh my, thank you so incredibly much. This is a really really lovely comment and I'm so completely flattered. I appreciate it!

[sakura_no_mi]

This was really lovely! So much quiet desperation in the way you painted Dean's inner thoughts, just beautiful :)

[egotists]

Thank you very much! ♥

[cordelia_gray]

Ooh, this is lovely, perfect and sharp. No need to be longer - you've caught the moment in amber.

[egotists]

Awe thank you! I'm always having trouble writing longer things, I'm afraid. For some reason it's just easier for me to put things in quick and to the point. I'm glad that people appreciate that!

[force_oblique]

<3
Nice~