Fic : Fields Inside My Mind | Arthur/Merlin

Aug 03, 2010 23:07

Title : Fields Inside My Mind
Rating : PG-13 (for theme and violence)
Pairing : Arthur/Merlin
Summary : Magic cannot heal all things.
Prompt : Arthur/Merlin. Merlin gamely goes along with the "mental affliction" jokes normally, but when he returns from war, he hides the fact that he's suffering from PTSD and the jokes are no longer funny. (Read more... )

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arien_elensar August 5 2010, 06:08:52 UTC
I really like your style of writing and the sparse dialouge goes a long way. This was a sad and belivable piece. I imagine Arthur is familiar with what Merlin is going through.

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hermitknut August 5 2010, 07:53:31 UTC
This is beautiful and sad - I love the way you'e written Merlin's feelings, it's genuinely touching.
HK

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auroraprimavera August 6 2010, 20:55:23 UTC
You already know what I think ♥

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mellacita August 9 2010, 01:53:05 UTC
Poor Merlin. I'm glad Arthur is there to help him learn to cope with this side of his destiny.

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miss_chevalier September 12 2010, 18:33:56 UTC
this was amazing.
I liked the whole atmosphere of it.
very well written!

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