[OneShot] From Manly to Beautiful

[eijihood]

Title: From Manly to Beautiful
Pairing: ShiChul (Shi Won x Hee Chul)
Rating: R
Warnings: Yaoi, AU, Sexual Situations, Violence, Death
Word Count: 5,500
Synopsis: It has been four years since Shi Won had last seen Hee Chul.
A/N: Written for the Super Junior AU contest at miracle______.

Comments

[missnhaca]

OHMYGAWD. Hello there, tears; I welcome you.

Ahhh - just, ouch ouch ouch. ;0;

[kawaiibabyheero]

XDD lol, sorry!

[ai_fantasy9]

I LOVE SHICHUL TOO! but they weren't my first otp...kichul was...then as i watched them interact with one another, i started to love shichul even more...so now it's my number one! =)

[kawaiibabyheero]

YAY another ShiChul fan. :)

[hamano_michiyo]

AHHHHH NO YOU KILLED HEECHUL ;O;

Omg this was so sad and I love how it keeps going to flashbacks then present and adding more depth to them and their relationship but whomg did you hafta kill HeeChul D:

ShiWons father is a bench and should die ;_; Ruining others families and his sons love and just... gah!

I love the bed scene of Full House too xDDD Omg the more shows you watch of them the more pairings you become aware of xD They're all one massive orgy xD

[kawaiibabyheero]

SORRY! D:

Thank you! Gyah and I'm sorry for Hee Chul. ^^;;;;

omg yes i look forward to watching more suju stuff and get to know the other members better. :)

[hoyah]

:3 you definitely have good ideas. i liked the general plot of this.

the thing is, though, the plot is very involved and intricate. and you had a very good setting, too. 1920's Korea... that sounds like something very interesting that could have been used to move the story along.

i think if you expanded this into a chapter fic, used more details and just drew the story out more, you'd have a truly beautiful piece of work.

there's so much about these characters and this setting and this plot that i think you could have said, but couldn't due to the one-shot requirement.

as it stands, i like it. but i think it could be so much more.

^^ i hope you don't think it's too mean for me to say that. :3 i really did like it.

[kawaiibabyheero]

there's so much about these characters and this setting and this plot that i think you could have said, but couldn't due to the one-shot requirement.

Actually to be honest you were right! I debated if I should just perhaps make this into a long epic one and start a new fic for the contest, but if I were the write a long epic one, I would have liked to have other SuJu members in it as well.

Sadly my knowledge of the other SuJu members are very limited and I'm like on a download rampage so I could watch more stuff on them and learn more about the other members. x)

Thank you for your comment! They were really insightful and helpful. :)

[hoyah]

^_^ well maybe once you have a firmer grasp on the personalities of all the other members, you could expand this into a chapter fic. :D i'd look forward to that.

[dbsklove]

woow your fic was really good~~ i thought i was gonna cry near the end T_T wahhhh siwon!! and heechul!!! T_____T