School Work!!

[eileen1386]

Ive been busy like crazy. I have a lot of english homework every night and I babysit until 10pm too! Well heres a recent assignment that I actually enjoyed reading but this is the paragraph i wrote on it. This Paragraph is in a new form we learned in my AP English class Rhetoric Précis

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[sundew1987]

It was generally a good paragraph. For some reason I just have a strong urge to edit it and make it better. Oh well, I guess I'm just a freak like that.