Re: ImprobableandthusSeptember 13 2010, 16:09:09 UTC
When most people looked back on it, heard the story, told the tales, almost everyone had the thought run through their minds at least once.
How much luck did this crew have?
The barrel may have never wound up in the hands of pirates.
They could have arrived at the small village a day too late.
The lightning may have not struck the execution stand. although no one knew if that was really luck
They may not have picked up a stray princess trying to save her country.
Their navigator may not have gotten bitten by a once-thought-extinct insect. no one said all of their luck was good
They may not have ended up on the one island that held the doctor that could cure her.
An errant splash of water in a land of desert may not have landed on their captain.
They may have never made it all the way up to the island in the sky.
They may have never had a ship that managed to take them all the way to the city of water before breaking down. and still saved their lives when it seemed hope was lostAny of the hammers of their crew may have
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Re: Improbablezhadra_ahniSeptember 14 2010, 03:51:45 UTC
Who needs luck when you have the will? Who needs coincidences when you have ambition? Who needs fate when you have dreams?
*_____* Fffff, oh MAN, this, this, this. That is totally the view they'd take-even if they do have luck, coincidences, and fate on their side, they don't rely on them at all.
Man, I'm so taken with that line. I may quote it at some point in the future, no lie.
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How much luck did this crew have?
The barrel may have never wound up in the hands of pirates.
They could have arrived at the small village a day too late.
The lightning may have not struck the execution stand.
although no one knew if that was really luck
They may not have picked up a stray princess trying to save her country.
Their navigator may not have gotten bitten by a once-thought-extinct insect.
no one said all of their luck was good
They may not have ended up on the one island that held the doctor that could cure her.
An errant splash of water in a land of desert may not have landed on their captain.
They may have never made it all the way up to the island in the sky.
They may have never had a ship that managed to take them all the way to the city of water before breaking down.
and still saved their lives when it seemed hope was lostAny of the hammers of their crew may have ( ... )
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My first time writing for One Piece other than just words prompting sentences, so I'm trying to get more involved with writing ^^;
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*_____* Fffff, oh MAN, this, this, this. That is totally the view they'd take-even if they do have luck, coincidences, and fate on their side, they don't rely on them at all.
Man, I'm so taken with that line. I may quote it at some point in the future, no lie.
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That is, without a doubt, one of the best lines. A snarky start with creative use of d's.
The whole thing is just nicely written. It makes me smile from start to finished. :)
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Oh wow.
He could never mistake the presence of charred flesh.
He wouldn't, would he.
(Did Oda know, do you think, when he gave Ace his devil's fruit that this was in his past? Because if he did... @_@)
*shivers*
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